Cool man.
I like the chill vibe you made.
The vocals are nice, those sound effects and all the little touches you did are very nice, I can tell you put a shit load of work into this song.
I'm trying to see any negatives in this song, So far everything is clear and sounding good, The man's voice is a little weird "I don't want to d-d-d-d-die" is sorta awkward haha. 5:04ish gets a little mushy.
You have a gift at this. Keep it up! :)