I liek the beggining, it sets the mood perfectly, the piano could sound a little more realistic
reverb is good n stuff
that break is a little lame could be more mad ass.
try to get some better drum samples kick n snare.
that synth is kick ass you should add a bass or something too idk
strings are sick woot
nice little break down thingy hell yea asdjfhasdf
allright now the both of us can go to sleep now..... awesome song bro
btw im drunk as fuck right now